THE DAY THE SUN ATE THE MOUNTAINS
The last
time that the Beatians saw the mountains was when Erie stopped singing. It was
not Erie’s fault; the lack of mountains did not bother Erie. Neither did Erie
think that singing can make the mountains disappear, why would anyone care
about the mountains? No one ever visited these mountains, besides, not a living
soul dared to climb up those mountains. Not after what happened to the girl
with opal hair. It was probably a hundred years ago, or 2 days ago, or was it
when Erie began singing? Does it matter anyway? It is fabled that the girl with
the opal hair climbed up the mountains and was made to live there for eternity,
it would have been fine had the mountains not been so unexciting, so vehemently
dreary. Beatians fear boredom over anything else. Given a choice between a long
life of careful abuses and a few years of reckless flattery the Beatians will
never cease to choose the latter.
Erie’s appearance was not the kind one
would remember, it was not particularly significant, it was not that Erie was
not good looking, it just did not possess the charm that is needed in a face or
in a person to be remembered vividly, or even at all. Erie’s nights comprised
ill-gotten currencies and a fervent desire to be remembered. Don’t we all covet
what does not come naturally to us?? For Erie, it was creating a lasting
impression. Had Erie not dreamt about the girl with the opal hair, the
mountains would still exist. Some think that Erie had made the girl up to
justify the incessant singing that continued till the sun came down and ate the
mountains. Some even aggressively believed it was a desperate appeal for fame.
Whatever be the reason Erie got what Erie wanted, at least for the time.
It all started the morning
of the yearly festival. The Beatians would observe one day of revelry, not that
there was a lack of it the other four thousand one hundred and fifty days. But
on this day they would dress in their finest garments and do things that are
expected to be done in festivals, I don’t really know what Beatian festivals
consisted of. Erie woke up that day not hoping to be remembered for years to
come. For as unimpressing as Erie was, Erie never failed to impress the people
who were fortunate enough to listen to the stories that Erie had to tell. Below
mentioned is the story/dream narrated by Erie.
“While returning home from my nightly duties
from the blue oak, an incredible opalescent light drew me to its mystical
embrace” The narration was interrupted shortly by Gregory the infamous town
carouser. Gregory or as they call him Sponge, owing to his incredible ability
to gulp down 10 pints of mead by 10 o’ clock in the morning, dropped a goblet
causing Erie to stop speaking for a second. “………….the light was nothing like I had seen before, it was not the moon as
the moon had gone to visit her brothers in the valley. As I walked towards it I
could hear the trees talking about the girl. She walked to the forest and
climbed up the mountains following a light. No, it was not this opalescent light,
the trees were sure it was ruby red. Then it all went silent for a while and I
could hear the wind, the wind as habitual was speaking in a tongue long
forgotten with time. As I followed the light further, I saw the girl, the girl
with opal hair. She was five, maybe six or a hundred, one can never know. She
was sitting by a brook, the brook seemed to have no water but something that
can be mistaken as water, no, it was more transparent than water normally is.” Tawny saw the townsmen preparing for the
parade and asked Erie to hurry up lest he misses it. “…… you thoughtless clown ! the town can wait, my story can’t. The girl
sat there like she had nothing to do, can you fancy? Nothing to do, a life of
such utmost futility. She did not seem to mind though. It is baffling how much
she did not seem to mind. A Beatian fears an idle life, you either work or you
die. The girl with the opal hair gestured me to go to her, curiosity took the
better of me, and I did. She told me her story, the story of how the mountains
don’t want to let her go and how she does not mind. But how she wishes the
mountains disappeared so that she can disappear with them. She does not want to
exist, nor does she want to be remembered. I asked her if I can tell her story and
she agreed, as long as she does not exist, the story does not matter. A story
is after all a story. Nothing more nothing less, that is it. And the next thing I remember is waking up in
my hut.” Sponge dismissively asked how Erie plans to get rid of the mountains.
“Have you learned nothing?? A story is
just a story. Stop asking what I plan to do with it”
Erie got tired of thinking of ways
to make the mountains disappear, how is it even possible to make something not
exist anymore. The girl with the opal hair did not want to exist. Not existing
is such an alien concept, Erie does not remember a time before existence. Does
nonexistence exist? The parade had started and the Beatians were all gathered
together in the town square, Sponger and Tawny were there too. Erie was still
in the hut, still thinking up ways to make nonexistence exist. The girl with
the opal hair was so unlike Erie, so elusive and such a frantic desire to be
forgotten and all Erie wanted was to be known and to always exist. Sponge came
in after the parade with some local mead that he vouched would clear up Erie’s
mind and help Erie think better. The drunken stupor made Erie break into a
song, not a song Beatians were familiar with or for the matter even Erie was
familiar with. Erie was singing in the tongue of the winds. Erie sang and sang
and sang.
No one knows
how long Erie sang, not that anyone ever kept track. Erie was obviously
insignificant, Erie’s song was nothing but a minor nuisance to the neighbors,
but not enough to stop Erie. But the Beatians remember when the sun came down
and gobbled up the mountains, it took just a second and they were gone. The
mountains were gone and along with the girl with the opal hair. Erie stopped the song not knowing how long it has been or
how Erie managed to sing for so long without eating or sleeping. But Erie was
now famous, not enough to be remembered for generations to come. Erie did not
create anything, merely made the mountains not exist anymore. The mountains did
not matter anyway.
I love this- the concept, the tone, the colour, the sound and the images.
ReplyDeleteA little suggestion: I think it could be better if the tenses were more uniform.
Keep writing.
Yes ma'am , I will work on that
DeleteWhy is adi Lizzy tho?
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